Prayerfully Poetic

A Collection of Prayerful Poems by Tim McGee

Eyes That Spoke

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I met Jesus on the road,

where dust clung to my feet
and the sun had browned
the edges of everything.

He was dirty too.

Not shining.
Not crowned.
Not distant.

Just there.

Our eyes met.

And I have never seen eyes
speak so loudly,
yet in silence.

somehow
His eyes knew my name.

They knew the places
and things within me
I had hidden even from myself,

knew the ache
I had learned to call ordinary.

There was no accusation.
Only mercy.

No demand.
Only invitation.

And in that single glance
something in me loosened,
as though a door
I had forgotten was there
had suddenly opened.

Without even understanding it
I sought God
and found Him looking at me.

I walked away
the same man,

but not the same heart.

The road was still dusty.
The world was still broken.

But now I had seen His eyes.

And once I saw
that kind of love,

I cannot return
to the life I lived before.


3 responses to “Eyes That Spoke”

  1. This is beautiful in its simplicity and piercing in its honesty. What struck me most is how the encounter is stripped of every embellishment we tend to add to Jesus. No glow. No throne. No dramatic unveiling. Just dust, sun‑worn edges, and a Savior who meets us on the same road we walk every day. That choice — to portray Him as present rather than distant — makes the moment feel startlingly real.

    The way you describe His eyes is the heart of the piece. Eyes that knew your name, knew the hidden places, knew the ache you had normalized — yet carried no accusation. That’s the gospel in a single glance: full knowledge, full mercy, full invitation. It’s striking how the transformation doesn’t come through a sermon or a miracle, but through being truly seen.

    I love the quiet paradox at the end. Nothing around you changed — the dust remained, the world remained broken — yet everything within you shifted. That’s exactly how grace often works. The landscape stays the same, but the heart doesn’t. Once you’ve seen that kind of love, returning to the old life isn’t just impossible; it’s unthinkable.

    Thank you for capturing a moment that feels both intimate and universal. Anyone who has truly met Christ will recognize themselves in this story — the same road, the same dust, the same mercy, the same new heart.

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    1. Exactly my thoughts! I have had encounters with someone whose eyes are piercing and it takes my breath away!

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  2. That’s right. After months on foot on dusty roads and without running water, Jesus was not clean. He was also a homeless couch surfer. The heads he touched to bless the unfortunate were also far from clean. Hallelujah!

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